Seven's Story

Origen~ Pg 06

27th Jan 2013, 12:00 AM in Origen~
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Origen~ Pg 06
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Haru Bells 27th Jan 2013, 12:00 AM edit delete
In which there is actually a little bit of effort put into the background! In one panel.

It's also another case of dialogue and/or image being altered in some way. In the first panel, I changed Seven's pose to one that's cuter.
In the second panel, I added a bit more grass.
As for the dialogue, Sansora's final line was originally "Goodbye, N...ah...Seven" but I liked how "Goodbye," sounded better.
I also added the "I'm supposed to have one too..." in the second panel.

The next page is the last page of Origen~, the first chapter of Shameless!
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